The morning sun shone brightly in the sky, chasing away the night and welcoming the new day. The beautiful sky was of a bright blue and the magnolia white clouds contrast beautifully with the sky. The presence of the morning breezes swayed the tree leaves which created the voice of nature...
What kind of story do you the above story fits? Kindly leave a reply in the comment page. Thank you and have a nice day.
I think many of you guessed correctly. The story was about two good friends having a picnic at the beach. Later something happened to one of them. The the story goes on.
Your story is either from good to bad or a good to good story. It may be about your lucky day, or how your day stated well but ended in a disaster. Your ending may either be sad, happy or reflective.
ReplyDeleteI agree with David. The possibilities are quite limited. The description of the weather as being sunny (sun shone brightly)and "beautiful" gives the impression of a very relaxed, slow-paced, story. A twist may occur to bring much-needed suspense into the story. I guess (knowing Arnold's writing ability) that this story may turn out to have a big twist, probably an accident, then it's resolution. Can't wait to see the full story. -Liang Hao
ReplyDeleteHi Arnold. Firstly, I would like to thank you for letting me see such a nice picture! Next, I feel that your story is "happy ever after" story where people dreams come true or the person is successful in what he do or he is very lucky etc. However, there may be a twist in the story when it started good and because of some things which happened which turned it into a sad or tragic story.
ReplyDeleteHi Arnold! I think your story may turn out to be a relaxing day at the beach after examinations. It may be a happy story where there would be no conflict or minor ones. However, there may be other incidents that may happen depending how you are going to write it. That is quite a nice picture!
ReplyDeleteHello Arnold. Your picture shows the blue blue sky which gives me a sense of calmness. I think it is going to be a cheerful day for your story. Looks like a wonderful day at the beach perhaps? The coconut trees seem to tell me so that you are at the beach. Hmm...it seems to the day is going to pass by smoothly with nothing scary, or perhaps you could have a twist and say a boy is about drown? Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeleteHI Arnold , I would think that your story would/might end up as maybe a sign that something good was going to happen or that maybe you thought it was a good time to go outdoors and then the weather might have changed ?
ReplyDeleteOn a side note , that picture is really quite nice !! :)
Nice picture, it could be the appearance of the bright blue sky after a very frightening storm. Good work though!!
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